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It was here I had a pen
Journals - Code Blue
Written by David Wright
The Fall Will Change Nothing So Lighten The Truck Up
   
Tuesday, 24 November 2009 13:26
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all it takes is words

for 'not closed for love.'

at least, an everyday

: un- subjugated poem :

the sounds on her hair,

crisp on colors, you could guess,

falling across uncaring for now

 

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Stormcrow
Re:It was here I had a pen
Nov 25 2009 17:43:42
"falling across uncaring for now"

Hurts... the words cascading around untrusting ears, an all too familiar feeling...

a sharp moment, softened by your words, and perhaps simply echoes in my own hollows right now, but it's Tao, no? You've created a pot molded from words, for the reader to lift to their ear, and hear their interior ocean echoing within...

Lovely, painful - thanks.
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