well I'm human. these stories need time to process properly. on my own schedule.
chefs and their little pots.
mui jim hein madong mui jim hein madong. pbroheil pbroheil, junecow. k'nyom ot dung. kn'yom mun yool. junecow prap rune pbroheil mui kai, pi kai.
ooo fun to practice! I miss cambodia but, the path is much more simple. was right in my face the whole time. only thing you can do is laugh, sometimes.
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Lovely to see or just see you're seeing a simple path. Viva all paths.
Craft appears to be the development you've spoken of. Yes, time.
Right now the non-linear is a bit too loose for the gravity of the emotion. How about a narrative once you've debriefed and reaccessed. The blog entries paint the writer's picture almost too much.
How about a version of the results with your chosen direction emphasized! The voice recordings are vital, of course, but far more powerful than your descriptions of them (yes, due to being of your raw and wonderfully insightful energy). My craftique is :
How about a patching together, slight as bearable, in-between stories !
Processing something like that and reporting it at the same time is difficult, especially when you're a poet.
My view is your finding just the right mixture of medium to use (those videos and photographs appear only the beginning of the potential you're seeking), and of course the time and space to develop.
The lengths you've gone to be changed by others shows. Thanks for these stories and, as always, keep living and writing them.
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