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#738

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The Nicest Man in the World 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago	Karma: 9
Kilowatt beast easy, that's what he'd say. rolling gringo daredevils, Kilowatt did two grills easy as licking jail pop-sickles. he'd say it's stupid caring too hard on the old ways. boulevard machismo guilty all the time, on, it's off, no contest it's better to die now than dumb.

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The Nicest Man in the World 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago	Karma: 9
― stone baby it’s not important to howl right now you’re not criticized for sounds outbound or desires or ideals or beliefs or miracles it’s here you stand as jelly as your legs might appear ― stone baby go ahead and breathe your pain aloud

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The Nicest Man in the World 5 Months, 3 Weeks ago	Karma: 9
He kissed your zombie into the floor so heaven had some thing to say about transcendentalism. It's here cops kill cops, hardwired into the victory booth the magistrates link buttercup sorcery to interrogation victims by the plural numbers of tomorrow. The wiggle ends as the beaches flood the seas of dinosaurs, we cuddle into our little dry shells and pray for a holy rain.

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The Nicest Man in the World 5 Months, 1 Week ago

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There is no plagiarism in glass blowing

her glass melted and
hoisted libertines aloud.

a pink martini classification,
rainbow-suspenders lifted-above.

the grease and the home-made cars,
toiling under the hood a first-class ride.

tonight it’s lights out.

a real field of calligraphy.

a pdx wind-chime

gassing another victory parade.

she spread the dual-carburetors and
a smoky cross was born to bare the levity of sons.

the hippopotamus grazing the steel city rag,
come-ons blind to the lips on the word.

sympathique http://popup.lala.com/popup/1657606150749956518
a goodnight to begin dancing until the end.

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#749

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Re:The Nicest Man in the World 5 Months, 1 Week ago

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The daughter

commands
ghost me.

i want an edit i cant spell.

gristle. ten meats and some shells.
bread circus tents eating the belly.

christened it.

divers in the river under the red wood.

it’s not a fault reading yourself a hero,
if you’ve got the balls to chop golden ego into nest eggs.

i read that once before,
it was the noon of the day you’d held my hand.

me, i told all the boys at school about capitalization,
drawbacks, cons, diasporas from shit-holes called home.

that’s how she’d broke the rule the king had writ,
a watershed persona not dead yet.

these lines braided ribbons into her voice,
a twisted pterodactyl still lonesome and happy not knowing.

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#750

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Re:The Nicest Man in the World 5 Months, 1 Week ago	Karma: 9
Kilowatt scores a kilogram accounting for the blood and the cost of labor it'd be better to forget your own name. it's easier here in the street, less cobwebs to smother lungs of mud. it does not matter, it does not calculate. the onomatopoeia of the week repeats grime frequencies of trees and toy robots expire.

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